I've decided to sort of get my most depressive lyrics out of my head, and on paper, so that maybe I can start making a bit more cheerful lyrics. Here's of them, called Snowscape. Progressive rock/ jazz/grunge. Please comment!

LYRICS ARE NOW UPDATED!

Verse:
"why bother"
carved in the ice
I see you cry (over a)
Soul gone numb
And you fear
The human shell
Of fear for what's inside

Chorus:
Careful darling, I am choking on fortune
Lips of sweet lies, seemed to be less certain
Why

Verse:
Cracks within
Revealing everything
Music of a
Soul gone numb
"Notes lie on the pillow"
Contours of my hell
Are you afraid of what you'll find?

Chorus:
Careful darling, I am choking on fortune
Lips of sweet lies, seemed to be less certain
Why

Bridge/outro
Children playing in the snowscape
Born of the dust, soon to be
Idle, angels of the snow
In Dysutopia
They smile