Stranger's World

Stranger's World


Who I am?
A silent mirror leaves room for doubts.
Strange voices sound
more common than my own.
Secretly,
I'm lost and not found
Who I am?
I don't know.

I'm a stranger in a stranger's world
Its hard to recognize when visions are blurred;
I see what happen through the eye of a third
I'm a stranger in a stranger's world.

Beyond my nose
people dying on their knees.
their hands are folded ,
skinny and empty.
A cross on the chest
promises to release
Pray, Pray,
for something to eat.

Action is action
and words are words.
We teach ourselves to love,
We teach ourselves to hurt.

I'm a stranger in a stranger's world
Its hard to recognize when visions are blurred;
I see what happen through the eye of a third
I'm a stranger in a stranger's world.

I see starving men
and hungry crows.
Sarcastically,
we all swallow (our) sorrows.
Stranger, stranger
I have one last question;
Am I a bad human?
I don't know.

thanks for reading,

Originally Posted by Phizzél

A silent mirror

I really like that phrase

thank you!

I've corrected a few mistakes, so here is the newest version.


Stranger's World


Who am I?
A silent mirror leaves room for doubts.
Strange voices sound
more common than my own.
Secretly,
I'm lost and not found
Who am I?
I don't know.

I'm a stranger in a stranger's world
Its hard to recognize me when visions are blurred;
I see what happens through the eyes of a third
I'm a stranger in a stranger's world.

Beyond my nose
people dying on their knees.
their hands are folded ,
skinny and empty.
A cross on the chest
promises to release
Pray, Pray,
for something to eat.

Actions are actions
and words are words.
We teach ourselves to love,
We teach ourselves to hurt.

I'm a stranger in a stranger's world
Its hard to recognize me when visions are blurred;
I see what happens through the eyes of a third
I'm a stranger in a stranger's world.

I see starving men
and hungry crows.
Sarcastically,
we all swallow (our) sorrows.
Stranger, stranger
I have one last question;
Am I a bad human?
I don't know.

thanks for reading,

I like all except for 'Beyond My Nose'

one day the devil came in my ear, whispered lighting if i wanted to hear, i agreed and he told me about this grass, if u burn it and inhale you'll feel like a blast, i asked where i can get this grass, he said anywhere as long as you got enough cash, then the devil walked out like that,i've been inhaling this smoke ever since then but then now the devil comes around the ben, i listened to him again, he said i'm taking away your life as i spitted out my weed stem, he said your friends you family,your life is mine, i was gunna call the police to report a crime, then i realized that they would've thought i was insane, throw me in a mental house and say i'm insane,so now the devil in back in my ear,and he said you can talk to me i'm here. he said you got none to fear, i'm your new family now,i jus said wow, you took my friends my family,my life,now your here saying you'll help me through my striph, all i got to say is why, jus cuz i burnt that grass and now i start to cry, then i open my eyes now i'm in the sky, thinking of what i've become,**** i jus realized that i'm the devils son, now i'm back to earth and realize this will never change, i jus want my life back can't i make an exchange, And now my father's talking to me trying to say, that he made a mistake he was jus at play, i jus turn my head with neglect, saying **** you i have no respect,what do you ecpect, you ruined me kicked me well i was down, and now you sit an laugh wearing the devils crown, he said to me there's no turning back, no second chance,no way to get back on track. so i sat in the corner with tears falling of my face, thinking of my old life and walk out with no trace, so now i'm thinking i should of never listened to the devil, then god appeared at hells level, i was filled with glee, and i asked him,Please GOD SET ME FREE, no my son i can't let you through heavens gate, See you gotta learn to love instead of hate, i jus went in that corner with thought, i'm the son of the devil in the middle is where i'm caught, so i turn to that grass that my father brought, burn and inhale until my lungs burn, now i'm in a corner with no place to turn, now god is in my ear and i yell, THIS IS NOT YOUR CONCERN,
Now i'm here with no one by my side, It was a long run but not i gotta get off the ride,the devil was my father and now all i can say is R.I.P., and god don't like to see much of me, i got no one in my life and a cry everyday, and since the day i first inhaled that grass my skies nhave been grey, i'm jus a stray, now sitting in this corner left to decay.

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