okk guys. this is my newest song.. its not finished but im just going to give you what i have so far.
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Im not sure where to start
or just what to say first
because im speaking from my heart
and theres so much to tell you <<<verse 1
So how 'bout i begin
by telling you how much i care
im gonna let you in
on all these years of feelings*

love of mine
holder of my heart
youve got me wrapped around your finger
and you dont even know it
so tell me why <<<chorus
you can give me butterflies
and never even notice me
love of mine

while its all coming out*
i guess ill tell you all about
how there was never any doubt
id always love you*
but its always been clear to me <<<verse 2
that you wont shed a tear for me
all though ill cry for hours
thinking how we'll never be

Love of mine
holder of my heart
youve got me wrapped aroung your finger
and you dont even know it <<<chorus
So tell me why
im still living in this lie
that someday you just may be mine*
love of mine
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please let me know what you think! much appreciated! i want your [constructive] criticism. any lines you dont like or something that doesnt make sense... or just your overall view of the song!! ive marked the lines that especially bug me with a star (*) so if you have any suggestions there, let me know also. THANKS!!!! (: (: (: (: