Haven't written a second verse yet. Just want to get some feedback. THANKS

Verse

We've been driving for hours
Anticipation is growing
Nobodys knowing
Where we are going
But you and me.
The air is cold outside my car
But it is warm right where we are
Changing lanes and taking chances
Pouring rain, exchanging glances
Oh this is the best time of year
I feel safe when your near.

Chorus

Nobody but you
Nobody but me
You're here with me
In my passenger seat.

Chorus

Nobody but you
Nobody but me
You're here with me
In my passenger seat.

Bridge

Street signs are saying sixty-five
What will it take to make you mine.


Chorus

Nobody but you
Nobody but me
You're here with me
In my passenger seat.



BRYAR PERRY 2009

I'll critique when there's another verse. Sorry to be contrary, but I need more!

Now i have motivation to write more

What about a last chorus, were you sing that it's you that sits in the passenger seat, and not her?

It was always you
and it was always me
now I'm here with you
in your passenger seat

:P