As he stands at the door
She falls down to the floor
Thinking
How could this happen to her
Now he's out in his car
And he knows that he took it to far
But now she's gone
It's all gone
No matter how much she cries
No matter how hard he tries
It won't change
Cause it's gone
It's all gone
Forever
And now she tries to get up
While he's on his second cup
This is way harder than they thought
It would be
No matter how much she cries
No matter how hard he tries
It won't change
Cause it's gone
It's all gone
Forever
She knows it's the end
But she's going to pretend
That everything is ok
But it's not
No matter how much she cries
No matter how hard he tries
It won't change
Cause it's gone
It's all gone
Forever
She begged him to let her go
But he shouted no
It would all end tonight
Now her tears are all dry
And he no longer tries
They know it won't change
Cause it's gone
It's all gone
Forever
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Good song. nice lyrics and rhyming
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thanks :]
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well adam
its not quite apparent to know what gendre your writing for, it seems to me like 'RAP' and I'm not up on rap at all, because I dont think it would fit anywhere else, its quite hard to orate never mind sing! if you dont intend it for rap, 'OR' your not writing for yourself it would be quite hard for an outsider to find the rythm and beat the way you have it layed out, although I see your hook, its by no means played enough, for me anyway. sorry
if you want others to understad your song structure U got to try a little harder I'm afraid!
jony bek -
Man i would like one of these comments on my songs? do you guys only post if you think its bad or what?
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