Hey Guys, I new on here this is only the second song I've posted let me know what ya think. I like the chorus but the verses need some work. Any suggestions?


[Verse 1]
You were there everyday of my life,
since you asked my mom to be your wife.
You stayed with us through each and every fight,
but didn't said I love you at the end of the night.

[Verse 2]
You were my father you just made the rules
Never taught me how to use any of your tools.
You never sat down and played with toys
never even told me to stay away from boys

I wish you could understand

[Chorus]
I want a daddy, not a father.
Wanna be your baby girl,
not just your daughter
Wanna run to you when I'm afraid
hold me tight until I'm alright
Chase the boys that make me cry
and promise me you'll never lie.

[Verse 3]
You were my father you just made the rules
Didn't even care if I hung out with fools.
And when the first boy broke my heart
you weren't there to find the missing part.

[Chorus]
I want a daddy, not a father.
Wanna be your baby girl,
not just your daughter
Wanna run to you when I'm afraid
hold me tight until I'm alright
Chase the boys that make me cry
and promise me you'll never lie.

[Verse 4]
Someday when I'm all grown up
Want you to walk me down the aisle
Make a toast and lift the cup
then dance with me for a while

[Chorus]
I want a daddy, not a father.
Wanna be your baby girl,
not just your daughter
Wanna run to you when I'm afraid
hold me tight until I'm alright
Chase the boys that make me cry