There was a time when I started to doubt myself
When no one believed in me

Oh so much pain
So much sorrow
I just wanted to shut my eyes tight
And wanted scream out loud

But that was the past
Now It’s a new day
It’s a new beginning

Oh now I have my eyes set on my bright future
I know there will always be another mountain
There will be another struggle
It’s a battle that will never end

But I wont stop till my last breath
I will cherish all my memories
and will make it through the pain
just to achieve my dreams
cause dreams do come true

it didn’t matter how impossible they seemed
it didn’t matter how hopeless they seemed
i just kept on trying again and again

don't know why
didn't have any proof
just a reason, a belief
that dreams do come true
oh dreams do come true

oh I have soared through the sky
i have broken all limitations
crossed every bridge
have weathered the storms
just to reach my dreams

oh but there was a time when i was surrounded by darkness
when it felt like the world had stop moving
and i started believing it was all over
but baby you gave me one good reason
to keep on fighting

Oh i rose from the ashes
i shone through the darkness
i fought to the limit
fought through the pain
Just to reach my dreams
Cause dreams
Oh dreams do come true

if you have any suggestions please tell

okay def. good lyrics and good idea st@r ...but here is my suggestion. state what you are saying in one verse. and then state new things in the other verses. what i mean by this is, if you look in the verses...3 of them say something about climbing a mountain ..but never in the same way. so its like you're repeating the same idea. give a new idea introduce new imagery or metaphor into the song maybe?
hope this helps a little..please check out my song goin' where the sun shines

ok i get it and thanx for the suggestions

vote for you
and said great
^^ because you are

Thanx and i liked your lyrics, pure love.

thank you