Truth or Dare

-Chorus-
I dare you to look me in the eyes and say that you don’t love me anymore
I dare you to kiss my lips and still stand tall on your feet
I dare you to hold her in your arms without thinking it’s me that you adore
I dare you to just pass by when you see me on the street
I dare you to tell me you and her will live happily ever after
Cause I just don’t believe you when you say you’ve forgotten

I quit your game, why play if I know that I’m meant to lose?
And that’s because I didn’t want to play by the rules
You knew you’re the winner so you don’t have to care
It’s my turn to lead a game so I choose “Truth Or Dare”

-Chorus-
I dare you to look me in the eyes and say that you don’t love me anymore
I dare you to kiss my lips and still stand tall on your feet
I dare you to hold her in your arms without thinking it’s me that you adore
I dare you to just pass by when you see me on the street
I dare you to tell me you and her will live happily ever after
Cause I just don’t believe you when you say you’ve forgotten

You’ll lose my game, because we both know they control your life
And that’s because you didn’t want to risk for a strife
I know I’m the winner so why do I still care?
Cause you’re still playing my version of “Truth Or Dare”

-Chorus-
I dare you to look me in the eyes and say that you don’t love me anymore
I dare you to kiss my lips and still stand tall on your feet
I dare you to hold her in your arms without thinking it’s me that you adore
I dare you to just pass by when you see me on the street
I dare you to tell me you and her will live happily ever after
Cause I just don’t believe you when you say you’ve forgotten

-Bridge-
It’s my game with my own rules
It’s my ground, I can’t be fooled
So you can’t choose truth when your lies are so good

-Chorus-
I dare you to look me in the eyes and say that you don’t love me anymore
I dare you to kiss my lips and still stand tall on your feet
I dare you to hold her in your arms without thinking it’s me that you adore
I dare you to just pass by when you see me on the street
I dare you to tell me you and her will live happily ever after
Cause I just don’t believe you when you say you’ve forgotten

Hmmm...
There's not much flow to the song. Try to vary the amount of syllables you use in your words.

I dare you to look me in the eyes and say that you don’t love me anymore (16 single syllable words in a row, then a 3 syllable one [19 syllables])
I dare you to kiss my lips and still stand tall on your feet (13 single syllable words)

This makes it seem really stretched out and...sort of dull.

I think the chorus is repeated too many times (4 choruses, 2 verses and a bridge) and the verses too small in relation to the size of the chorus.

Hope this helps.

Angel I love this idea, and for that reason I want to suggest a little improvement. For one thing, the word "that" is probably the most over-used word in the English language. Half the time it can be left out. See how this sounds:

I dare you to look in my eyes and say you don't love me anymore
I dare you to kiss my lips and still stand tall on your feet
I dare you to hold her and not think it’s me you adore
I dare you to just pass by when you see me on the street
I dare you to tell me you'll live happily ever after with her
Cause I don’t believe you when you say you’ve forgotten

I quit your game, why play if I know I’m meant to lose?....

Nice work, again

Cool idea. It's original and that's refreshing. Keep it up. Nice work.