"The Darkness"

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  1. seeker160 said:

    Default "The Darkness"

    I wrote this song very quickly it was one of those things that flows into you head and out through your hands onto paper. It all about a guy that trapped by this girl whose is just out of reach. He doesn't want her on his mind even though he crazy for her because he knows it will just never quite be. But at the end he finally gives into it like every other time cause he can't beat his feelings. She different and special and you can't control your heart when it tells you she's the one.

    I had a few friends tell me the really liked it so i thought i see what the world thought. Thanks for any comment and criticism.

    The darkness it drowns me
    and your voice surrounds me.
    but only when i try to sleep

    So i try to stay awake
    so i try to stay away
    from you
    (echo) from you

    The nights are so lonely
    And the days don't know who i am
    who i am

    So i try to stay awake
    so i try to stay away
    from you
    (echo) from you

    When i see you down the hall
    i don't know what to do at all
    anymore...

    Should i run away
    or should i just run
    towards you again(sustained)

    (Interlude)

    I don't know if i can live with out you
    but i know you don't want me by your sides
    but i will survive

    (chorus possibly)
    So i try to stay awake
    so i try to stay away
    from you
    (echo) from you

    The darkness it drowns me
    and your voice surrounds me.
    but only when i try to sleep

    (music fades out and slows)
    I guess i need to fall asleep
     

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