Tousand pieces

plz let me know what u think plz. i would like it alot if u tell me what u think of the song. i would like it if u had any ideas of what i should change.
its about a boy dieing for his girlfriend. someone was going to shoot her and her boyfriend to rob them but he took the bullet and the robber ran. the boy friend died, but he did not move on to the next life. he stayed in the mirrors to watch over her. he watches over her until she forgets him completly.



Title: Thousand Pieces

A few years have gone by since that faithful day. I have watched over you unable to to touch you,or kiss those sweet lips of yours. I still feel the bullet in my chest that took me away from you forever. I have only one regret is now I have to watch someone else take you into their arms. I watch within the mirrors then I!!.....

(Chorus) Shatter, shatter, and shatter into a thousan pieces. you dont feel me anymore. you dont even remember me anymore. I watch within the mirrors,watchin as another boy takes my place in your life. i died but i remain in this world so I can watch over you. As long as you still remember me.As long as you think of me i shall remain. I watch as he lays beside you as i used to do. I watch as he touches your body in the dark of night. I watch within the mirrors, and as you forget me I... Shatter into a thousand pieces. I shatter into a thousand pieces as he take my place. The memories of you and me fade away then its gone shattered into a thousand pieces. (chorus end)

i watch as the pisures of me and you dissapear. They are put in a box and stored away. forgotten and left to gather dust until nothing remains. Our pictures are replaced by you and him. There are no more picures of me. You dont even mection my name no more. You dont even talk about me anymore. You have forgotten everything we did and everything we said. He is taking my place. After you told me no one can take my place in your heart. A tear falls down my cheek, and when it hits the ground I......

(choursx2)

Every mirror in your home shatters into a thousand pieces. you ahve forgotten me no need for me to stay and watch you. I never thought you would forget me. Never though you would let my memory slip into the void. You must no longer care, just throw my memory away like a bad dream. I never forgot you. I didnt want t move on, because i wanted to watch over you. I love you with all my heart and I still do. I will always will love you. I shall move on now and i shall wait for you. Now I....

(chorusx3)
(end of song)

Really great song, and I have a great music video idea in my head