Cutaway to Christ

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    PrinceComedy said:

    Smile Cutaway to Christ

    This is my first song in two years. I think it describes my situation correctly. Feedback will be appreciated. I know it's not perfect, I messed up on some stanzas and rhyme schemes.

    The path that I choose
    Is nowhere to be found
    The road that I take
    Ends the moment I step out.

    I fell in your shoes
    Too big for me to wear
    I cried out your name
    But it wore out in the air.

    My parents just told me
    to step out and see
    But they didn't tell
    the lies that were there.

    So I just,
    Stepped outside
    and held his hand

    I asked him of
    Forgiveness..

    This Cutaway to Christ
    Has no end, it has no feist.
    It has the love of God
    From hugs to nods,
    It has a branch of Trust
    No need for lies.

    I was in need of
    Friends that would care.
    Met him this past year
    He seemed just rare.

    No worries surrounding
    The path I took
    Things were outstanding
    My head that he shook.

    He taught me how to
    Search underneath.
    He taught me how to
    Forgive the weak

    The path that was taken,
    I followed his tracks.
    And to the end I
    saw him in the packs.

    That's when I knew
    That this..

    Cutaway to Christ was
    the answer to it all,
    The happiness surrounding
    Would lead me to it's call.

    It would be,
    That this Cutaway
    was good in the end
    Indeed.
    Last edited by PrinceComedy; 06-16-2010 at 01:33 PM.