shOrt paragraphh pleasee to spanishhhh ("

He is my other half , he makes me smile like no other and gives me all the happiness i could ever ask for. Hes the love of my life , and i cant help but be anything other than happy when we are together. God couldnt have brought someone anymore amazing than him into my life and im so thankful for every moment we have together. Baby your my whole world , my life , and without you i dont know where id be .

Can someone please correct my try? Thanks.

El es mi otra mitad, el me hace sonreir come ningun otro y me da toda la felicidad que podria pedir. El es el amor de mi vida, y no puedo hacer otra cosa que ser feliz cuando estamos juntos. Dios no pudo traer a mi vida a alguien mas maravilloso y estoy tan agradecida por cada momento que compartimos juntos. Bebe, eres mi mundo entero, mi vida, y sin ti no se donde estaria.

That was great! The only thing I saw was that 'quando' should be spelled 'cuando.'

Your translation is great!
There is just a little thing, it must be "estoy tan agradecida" not "soy tan agradecida".

Originally Posted by bedroomeyes

That was great! The only thing I saw was that 'quando' should be spelled 'cuando.'

Italian influences