CMNT PLZ..... Night of Unbearable Loss

I wrote this a while back so I;m not quite sure exactly what I was trying to write about, but I'm pretty sure it's about that period of time between breaking up and the feeling the first breeze of sanity after you've come to accept, or at least cope with it. It's about the person who did the breaking up reaching out to the other, who has fallen into a depression that they don't want to come out of, and trying to help them back to their feet. Hope you like.


Another day is lost
looking for you now
more of my time is lost
looking for what you didn't leave behind
why do you hide
why do you hide

Reveal the pain you want inside
there's a line you want to cross
you want to numb the feeling
of this unbearable loss

Stare out at the twilight
whisper to the moon
like a psychotic patient
who finds no one else to talk to

Come back
Please come back
With all you took from me
Come back from the raging sea
You thrusted yourself into
Don't know what you're trying to prove
But its apparent
That you're not meant to be
Anywhere too far from me
So tighten up the chain
Let me pull you back
So hard I'll pull you back
To a darkened realm of only me

Another tear of blood
Claws away from my eye
Not because I'm hurt
But from a loss of my favorite lifeline
Is there still time
Is there still time

To flush my system clean
Dark presence flowing through my veins
An intruding thought of you
Breaking the last link of this chain

I will scream your name
To every damn star in the sky
Until I can erase the feeling
That the absence of you means I will die

That the absence of you means I will die

Come back
Please come back
With all you took from me
Come back from the raging sea
You thrusted yourself into
Don't know what you're trying to prove
But its apparent
That you're not meant to be
Anywhere too far from me
So tighten up the chain
Let me pull you back
So hard I'll pull you back
To a darkened realm of only me

Can you hold your breath
Don't let it out quite yet
The art of suffocating
Is a promise not a threat

Now let it out real slow
And feel the air in your lungs
Without me you're still alive
Your life is still young
So don't feel like the world has stopped spinning
It's revolutions have only begun
Soon the sun will shine bright
Engulfing the night into none

Oh, also, the person who is doing the reaching out is trying to cope with it themselves while also taking the responsibility of helping the other who can't seem to find the power to help them self.