Thank you for taking your time to translate this song for me. It's a song my boyfriend sang to me so I wish I knew what it said. Thanks again

Lyrics for "Poljubi me" - Osman Hadzic

Na peronu ti i ja
dva su puna kofera najteza
al' jos je teza tuga
Kad se dvoje rastaju
onom koji odlazi
ljubav jos je sluga

Poljupce bar ne stedi
olaksaj mi to sto slijedi

REF.
Poljubi me za rastanak
i ostavi pismo u kome pise
da ces me voljeti i cekati
i da za mene dises

Poljubi me za pobjedu ljubavi
kad nemiri te snadju
suze mi isplaci na grudima
za srecu da mi se nadju

Na peronu ti i ja
sutnja mjesto pozdrava najteza
a laksa je od tuge
Onom koji ostaje
rijeci srce kidaju
nevjere su sluge

Poljupce bar ne stedi
olaksaj mi to sto slijedi

REF.

Kiss me

Na peronu ti i ja
On a platform you and I
dva su puna kofera najteza
there are two heaviest and full suitcases
al' jos je teza tuga
but the grief is heavier
Kad se dvoje rastaju
when two people part
onom koji odlazi
to the one who's leaving
ljubav jos je sluga
love is still a servant

Poljupce bar ne stedi
at least dont save your kisses
olaksaj mi to sto slijedi
make easier what's coming

REF.
Poljubi me za rastanak
Kiss me goodbye
i ostavi pismo u kome pise
leave me a letter which says
da ces me voljeti i cekati
that you will love me and wait for me
i da za mene dises
and that you're breathing for me

Poljubi me za pobjedu ljubavi
Kiss me for victory of love
kad nemiri te snadju
when restlessness finds you
suze mi isplaci na grudima
cry the tears on my chest
za srecu da mi se nadju
for happiness to be there for me

Na peronu ti i ja
On a platform you and I
sutnja mjesto pozdrava najteza
silence instead of goodbye is heaviest
a laksa je od tuge
but it's easier than sorrow
Onom koji ostaje
to the one who's staying
rijeci srce kidaju
words are tearing the heart apart
nevjere su sluge
infidelities are servants

Poljupce bar ne stedi
at least dont save your kisses
olaksaj mi to sto slijedi
make easier what's coming


Sorry if its not that good, it been a long time since I translated anything

Nice, it just seems you try to preserve word order over fluidity sometimes.
I'd just suggest:

You and I at the railway platform
the two full suitcases are the heaviest
but the grief is still heavier.