my country lyrics

“feel her”

verse. 1

nobody feel the sun
until they’re with someone
who shines till the day is done
then you’ll know that’s the one
every man dreams of her so long
that gets you in that special song
puts you out for everyone
just to shine your eyes some

chorus

that special girl
she owns my world
can’t get away from her
taken away my hurt

verse. 2

the pain of everyday life
makes poison keep me alive
nothing takes away the dive
on top of the highest climb
jumpin off sayin i might die
but when i land soft like sky
my insides break like a lie
and she’s the angel by my side

verse. 3

if i could give her everything
that she’s already given to me
i would have to wrestle the sea
seems like an impossible feat
but she watches me definitely
making me feel good, so i sing
like i now realize the meaning
of what beautiful is to seeing

Not bad, some strange wording at times, but not bad.
Just remember that every line doesn't have to rhyme and "over-rhyming" is WAY worse than not rhyming at all.
And just keep practicing. Even if it's no good and you've nothing in particular to write about, write every chance you get and you will get better.
I hope I was helpful. Maybe you could comment on my newest lyric?