Two One's For a Six

"Two One’s For a Six"

Tears of revelation fall
From forces evil and unseen
Like a closing in the stars
Armageddon’s final deed

Of forces good and evil ‘like
Judgment soon will feel his tie
Fought to mark a blackened site
One will win
One will fall
As into darkness we all cry

The sparks of two stars did collide
And lit the fires of the sky
The souls we have had yet to die
Just ourselves, electrified
Fizzled out and left to fall

From the blackness
We did fall

Tears of revelation fall
From forces of our deities
Like an ultimate of suns
Armageddon’s final deed

Predict a power un-lifelike
To contemplate those to die
Envisage our empty right
All will leave
None will stay
As into darkness we all die

No more desolated nights
This fight the human race has lost
Like stars extinguished from the night
Nothing light will bear this cross

The sparks of two stars did collide
And lit the fires of the sky
The souls we have had yet to die
Just ourselves, electrified
Fizzled out and left to fall

From the blackness
We did fall
We did fall

From the blackness
We did fall

I like the subject matter you have going on here. I like to write about armageddon, the human race, the apocalypse, and other topics like that. Maybe it's because I am a sort of nihilist, but these lyrics fit together for your writing style.

It is very hard to come by lyrics that can't be improved though. I think that instead of saying "From the blackness", it should go "From the darkness", but that is just an opinion from the outside looking in. That's what makes writing lyrics so great, the vision comes from the person who writes it only.

It's funny because I actually had darkness before blackness. I kept changing between the two, unable to happily pick one. Thank you for the advice, though! I think I'll take you up on that. Anything to make my work sound better!

No problem. Feel free to comment on my lyrics as well.

Very dark, very beautiful. Good job.