Dive Into Oblivion (To Be Your Friend Again)

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  1. SljSlj's Avatar

    SljSlj said:

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    Sorry, I really don't wanna overrun the forum with my lyrics, but I just enjoy sharing my work so damn much. I think alot of you will enjoy this and hopefully be able to relate to it.


    DIVE INTO OBLIVION (TO BE YOUR FRIEND AGAIN)

    I've got so much to say...
    And "rest in peace" is too cliche
    You're all I found when I was lost
    Our paths are forever crossed...
    In life or death

    You gave me more than I can repay
    I can give this song, but not this day
    For it's far too late
    **** your accursed fate

    A resurrection...
    Juxtaposition
    Dive into oblivion....
    Just to be your friend again

    You too, had more to say...
    But your life: cut short, thousand days
    I'd like to think you're not lost
    Doesn't matter, cause you always find your way...
    In life or death

    I dive...
    To believe you're still alive
    I dive...
    To believe you're still alive

    For resolution
    Justification
    Dive into oblivion...
    Just to be your friend again
     
  2. rapperindamakin said:

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    very nice, its kinda catchy
     
  3. SljSlj's Avatar

    SljSlj said:

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    Yeah, it kinda is. Either you're really nice or I'm really good (not to sound conceited) because you never have anything bad to say about my writing.
     
  4. rapperindamakin said:

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    naw you good, i just dont like to make people angry but if there is one part i would fix is that you use your chorus to much
     
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    SljSlj said:

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    I don't think I used any part too much, but you are, of course, entitled to your opinion.
    Last edited by SljSlj; 08-22-2010 at 05:25 AM.
     
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    OneSongWayne said:

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    I can feel the "void" as the words progress. It's a good write for your friend. Well done.