Stalking devil

This is a song I wrote about paranoia and being stalked by the devil, I got the idea from films like the exorcist, drag me to hell, paranormal activity etc. Let me know what you think

How can this be?
Your in on it to
Your words follow the sequence
Intense deja vu
Such a harsh realisation
How can you be so cruel

The devil bekons
Im frozen with fear
Bleeding my blood
Shedding my tears
Speaking damnation on my soul
Your all vessels for his voice
With my muscles stripped of strength
I can only surrender
I have no other choice

I feel your scorching breath
Your form hidden behind the air
Your hand poised
Ready to snatch my reality away
And trap me in your realm forever
An eternal claustrophobic nightmare

Such a sadistic predator
Such hopeless prey
Toying with me
Impending doom
Why wont you bring the hammer down?

This reminded me of my lyric "Caught Up" right away, maybe I'll post it later so you can see.
Anywhozzle... good job, keep it up.

Originally Posted by SljSlj

This reminded me of my lyric "Caught Up" right away, maybe I'll post it later so you can see.
Anywhozzle... good job, keep it up.

Thank you, yeah it would be good to give your one a read