Well this is my first time writing lyrics... Every opinion and criticism is welcome. I can't desribe the music i have in mind to go with these lyrics, but it's kind of power metal.

Oh sun, sinking again
Twilight fire burning in her eyes.
Oh moon, show me the way
Break the chains that hold me in despair...
(Drums enter, faster tempo)

Oh wind blowing free
let me ride you and fly to the sky.
Eternal traveler, breath of earth,
become my wings, be my hurricane

Oh Lord, i pray
The end of rainbow is still so far away
I close, my eyes
Begin the journey to the endless skies

Fullmoon swaying in my eyes
Got betrayed by night's lies
Standing on a moonlight bridge
But it seems i still can't reach

Fullmoon swaying in my eyes
Got betrayed by night's lies
As i see you time stands still
Now i know how life must feel

Winter breeze, sing for me
Aurora's colours dancing with the sky
At last, I'm free
I howl while chasing my unending dream
(Guitar solo)

Fullmoon swaying in my eyes
Got betrayed by night's lies
Standing on a moonlight bridge
But it seems i still can't reach

Fullmoon swaying in my eyes
Got betrayed by night's lies
As i see you time stands still
Now i know how life must feel