Chained Down

The first finished song in a loooong time...I'm really happy with the chorus and verses but the bridge is total crap and so is the changed chorus, but...whatever

The calendar has less and less sheets for no reason
Time’s dragging on too slow and yet too fast
There’s no possible way to get out of this prison
And I figured that out with every day that passed

-Chorus-
You got me chained, chained down
So I break, break down
It’s like you’re coming out of a wall
Just to put a knife to my throat
That’s when I know I’m stuck in a freefall
And that I’m chained, chained down
Forced to break, break down

And it’s the same e-very time I try a new path
It gives me hope then turns out to be blocked
So that I always have to turn around and go back
And each time I do I hope you’re there, but you’re not

-Chorus-
You got me chained, chained down
So I break, break down
It’s like you’re coming out of a wall
Just to put a knife to my throat
That’s when I know I’m stuck in a freefall
And that I’m chained, chained down
Forced to break, break down

-Bridge-
Suddenly I hear that song playing in the background
My eyes fill with tears and as I stop to breathe
The chains break and these cold walls come crashing down
I’ve finally found the strength I need to leave

-Chorus-
No longer chained, chained down
I didn’t break, break down
And now you’re going back in the wall
I removed the knife from my throat
That’s when I know I’m
No longer chained, chained down
I didn’t break, break down
And now you’re going back in the wall
I removed the knife from my throat
You liked to see me stuck in a freefall
When I was chained, chained down
I didn’t break, break down

thats awesome as
but i think in the chorus it would be better if you went
chained down,chained chained down
instead of chained,chained down
of course that all depends on your idea for the tune
and also break down,break break down