half finished

these are all my half finished and just started songs


Surrogates:
Chorus:
you are the surrogates
fake it till you make it
or you might just break it
lost, blind eyes fall into the silence
cause you are the surrogates
and we reject your blindness

no warranty and now the surrogates can bleed
Underneath the wieight of your hate
they tore down their walls and gave into the pain

Out of the ashes:
Out of the ashes and into the new
fly like a pheonix into the blue
if i counted to three
would you hold your breath would you do that for me
of course not but
you couldnt see the flame
now only ashes remain
its time for a change.

your digging a shallow grave
so watch the sky
for a shooting star
so you can wish to die another way

i was broken so i set myself alight
now i arise, clean slate new life

you walk against the grain
as i step out of the flame
face to face were not so different you and i
but now i see a break
the hole lets in the light
and a demons stares back through the blight

so stay freeze frame
so the ashes they can drain
and take away the pain
of the echoes that
release the gat

and you will fall
no one to bear the pall

set this world ablaze
and pray well be remade
set this world on fire
your hate will be the lighter

on fire we tire until the flames retire.



there are mor but i cant think of them right now blah

adding new chorus i just thought of

hit him again
cos you feel unloved
hit him again
cos he was left untouched
Hit him again
are his eyes still shut?
hit him again
just to feel tough

Yay more:
fight back
cos you know that your loved
fight back
cos now you've been touched
fight back
so you can open your eyes
fight back
so he knows hes not tough

hit him again
cos you feel unloved
hit him again
cos he was left untouched
Hit him again
are his eyes still shut?
hit him again

That Is Amazing - Why didn't I write it??

no warranty and now the surrogates can bleed
Underneath the wieight of your hate
they tore down their walls and gave into the pain

And this part....wow....

I wish I would've written the song
just to feel tough

thanks heaps

awesome, you have a pretty cool way with words

thanks bro means alot