Stagnant waters

A song I wrote about the loss of innosence and how humans mess things up, let me know what you think

Its such a tragedy
Our innosence is lost
Eroded by the sands of time
Happiness where did you go?
Will I ever see you again?
These changes where so undetectable
Give me back my childs eyes
Just one more time
Let me look at the world
With that sense of excitement

Self awareness and freewill
Are they really such blessings
It really doesn't feel that way
If this is what we choose

Despite all the pain the sun will still rise
Giving us life
Oblivious to the suffering below
Maybe if someone let him know
He'd stay in bed
And leave us in our darkness

Up to my neck in comfortable misery
Like stagnant waters
As life drifts on by
Sometimes I wish it would drag me under
Another day gone by in the blink of an eye
Holding onto a hope that one day things will change
Each morning I wake up
Everythings still the same

When will we wake up from the fantasy
Dreaming of the perfect life
The perfect world
We need to make a change
It can only come from us
We have no one else to blame

I love it .... it's so true!

its awesome i just got one suggestion you coulkd have "another day gone BY in the blink of an eye" just makes it flow more

Originally Posted by LyricsAngel

I love it .... it's so true!

Originally Posted by Carpe dium

its awesome i just got one suggestion you coulkd have "another day gone BY in the blink of an eye" just makes it flow more

Thank you for the feedback, really appreciate it, yeah I added the "by" to that lyric, cheers for the tip

sweet any of you think u could check out my lyrics would help heaps