This beautiful view

A love song i wrote, let me know what you think

You look just like an angel
Your skin glowing in this light
It brings me to tears
Your desire to be here with me
Holding me tonight
Getting lost in these moments
As the world disapears
And time stands still
Nothing matters but here and now

How many hearts have been captured by this beautiful view
How many special moments have been shared
And precious memories created
My mind overflowing with admiration
To the beauties of nature that lay before me

Please say you'll stay here with me
Your everything I could possible want you to be
You make life so easy for me

How much passion has been shared right here
As the sunset radiates its soft golden glow
The seeds of romance are sown
And now new beauty is growing

i dont really like love songs that much but this was was alright but i think the last line looks a little out of place
you could have something like uhhh
and now new beauty is growing

or maybe you could say
the seeds of romance are sown below
and now new beauty is waving hello

hope i help

Wow this is really romantic lovey dovey but I really like it haha.
To me this seems like a passionate pillow talk song~

Originally Posted by Carpe dium

i dont really like love songs that much but this was was alright but i think the last line looks a little out of place
you could have something like uhhh
and now new beauty is growing

or maybe you could say
the seeds of romance are sown below
and now new beauty is waving hello

hope i help

Originally Posted by Miki Digi

Wow this is really romantic lovey dovey but I really like it haha.
To me this seems like a passionate pillow talk song~

Thanks a lot for the feedback guys. Yeah I think the last line does kinda stick out a little, I quite like "and now new beauty is growing"