A feedback would be nice , i can handle critic so don't hold back ( well don't be cruel )

Lend me your lips I want your kiss
or give me your hands, I need your touch
your eyes will do the best, I want someone to see me the way you did.
I'll bite on it and try to forget
when you said its like going nowhere
falling sky high and little further

It's to late to mention now
the long walk we had settled for
hasn't come to be more than a short forgotten story

Chorus :
And from the corner of this new street
you look it me like this was never meant to be
The light that doesn't escape my eyes reminds me
of how this has come to be
and through it all I still hold you close
Maybe you think the same of me
the long looks between you and I are tearing heart deep
But I must never forget
You inspired me to breath

Lend me your lips I want your kiss
or give me your hands, I need your touch
your eyes will do the best, I want someone to see me the way you did.
I'll bite on it and try to forget
when you said its like going nowhere
falling sky high and little further

It's to late to mention now
the long walk we had settled for
hasn't come to be more than a short forgotten story

Chorus :
And from the corner of this new street
you look it me like this was never meant to be
The light that doesn't escape my eyes reminds me
of how this has come to be
and through it all I still hold you close
Maybe you think the same of me

( pause for guitar and then continues same chord progression as chorus )

But what if I kissed you soft and so deep
that you lips will tremble, pacified and unmoved
so the words that follow will stay silent, forgotten
and only the feelings pressed on your lips, sinking
to your heart will remain
even in the air for us to breath
for us to breath
for us to breath
breath
breath


just breath