A Few Lyrics Again Wrote Out Of Boredom (Untitled)

Hey everybody, this is my first rap song (well at least I tend to think so) I just wrote in 10 minutes or so, so please comment good or bad doesn't matter, but please be realistic. And if somebody could give me a title for this song I was just so bored that I couldn't come up with any.

You think you're rappin
But talkin bout nothin
Now stop talkin already
You're just embarrasin yourself
Nothin else
So give me that mic
So that I can show you
What real rappin is like

I got a full metal jacket
I'm bulletproof
There is word on the street
That there might be a hit on me
So it better be not one of you
Or I'll be comin
At the most unexpected time
Slittin your throat
And hangin you upside down

You think you're rappin
But talkin bout nothin
Now stop talkin already
You're just embarrasin yourself
Nothin else
So give me that mic
So that I can show you
What real rappin is like

Yeah I know I don't rhyme much
But the real deal is the words you say
Not how many rhymes did you do?
So step the **** down the stage
Or I'm gonna throw you down
You should count yourself lucky
Cause you're still breathin
If it were up to one of my homies
You would be gettin your xss pounded
By the devil himself 6 feet under me

You think you're rappin
But talkin bout nothin
Now stop talkin already
You're just embarrasin yourself
Nothin else
So give me that mic
So that I can show you
What real rappin is like
Now it's time to shut it down
And leave
This place
For good or for worse
Man let's shut it down
Cause I'm startin to droll

I think the concept is good and especially like the the bulletproof verse, but I you might want to try making the lines closer in length, though it might work for the beat your using, since I'v never actually heard you rap this.

Call it "Straight oldskoolin'-"