What's the deal with Iraque?
When all we want's our freedom back
I guess that's just too much to ask
Of my uncle Sam

Why's our country in such debt
When all we want's cheap cigarettes
I guess that's just to complex
For my uncle Sam

Chorus:
Uncle Sam is dead
Died on the battlefeild
Moneybags in hand
But they weren't too good a sheild
Shot through the heart
With a pain he couldn't feel
So marks the end
Of our founding father's deal
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I hate airport security
Now it takes an enternity
To escape your own country
And a find a Cousin Sam

Can't hide from this recession
Causin' me so much depression
What we need's a resurection
Of our Uncle Sam

Chorus:
Uncle Sam is dead
Died on the battlefeild
Moneybags in hand
But they weren't too good a sheild
Shot through the heart
With a pain he couldn't feel
So marks the end
Of our founding father's deal
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Bridge:

Now it's just marketing
Lower taxes and bargaining
No freedom or democracey
Just a game of monopoly

Chorus

copyright 2010 Alison Stewart

Very nice! It has a nice flow to it, and no forced rhymes that I can tell. This is good stuff

I agree with Zachre, but I don't think this is a rap though ? It looks more like a song to me. U're good Ivy !