Chiasmus

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  1. Matreyu918 said:

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    Running out of time, inner eye on that
    Tick tick tick tockin paradigm
    Insecure with the state of my mind
    Predefined as misaligned, under refined
    Exasperated and agitated with this so called
    Status Quo

    So I present the manifesto
    Of a mad sh*t virtuoso
    The superego of an unhinged anti-hero
    Binged out on my own counter flow

    Appetite like an astrocyte
    Soul spent by this Sanctimonious chiasmus
    Self-appointed catalyst of a much needed Iconoclasm
    Atheistic Neoplasm, non-denominational abolitionist
    This is the gospel of a theological abortionist
    Last edited by Matreyu918; 08-06-2013 at 02:36 PM.
     
  2. LooknGlass said:

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    Interesting and an enjoyable read. Although it reads more like a poem. I have an extensive vocabulary (not tooting my own horn) and yet you still made me break out my dictionary!! Anyway, I enjoyed this and found it fascinating of sorts.
     
  3. Matreyu918 said:

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    Thanks! I appreciate the feed back. Reading your comment kind of stokes the fire a little bit more than it already is. I guess it kinda is a poem, my intention is more like a hip/hop vibe (Think Eyedea, Astronautalis, or Doomtree), I can hear the music it goes with in my head. I plan to expand on it in the future.
     
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    Wow I had to use the internet and all of its power to understand this one amazing vocabulary words like that are not used very often nowadays good job I enjoyed reading.
    There is not enough space or time to truly let the song unwind