Pain

Verse one:
I've been hiding behind a wall
That no one can breakdown
'Cuz people don't stick around

I've been keeping my mouth shut
Because I never say enough
But somehow say too much

Chorus:
There comes a time in everyone's life
Where they can realize what they've got
Or they can sulk in all their pain..

There comes a time to let go
To move on, and let love grow
Or you can sulk in all your pain...
(Ye-ah)

Verse two:
I've been masked by all the hurt
No trouble faking a smile
The pain only lasts a while

I've been believing all the lies
No truth in disguise
Cuz' people don't stick around

Chorus:
There comes a time in everyone's life
Where they can realize what they've got
Or they can sulk in all their pain..

There comes a time to let go
To move on, and let love grow
Or you can sulk in all your pain...
(Ye-ah)

In the midst of tweaking, and adding a bridge. This is the rough draft but I wanted to shareeee xD

This could turn into a very strong song with moody verses and a nice, uplifting chorus. Maybe it would be stronger to replace "they" and "their" by "you" and "your" (Where you can realize what you've got etc.)

This is a simple, straight ahead song lyric.......my favorite kind!This could be a hit if you had a great band to put it to music.

Now you know I like this song don't think I don't your an amazing writer don't ever let someone including your self tell you otherwise. I have felt this same way when I first read it I didn't really dive into it but now as I read it again I realize that this is something that could refer to me as well.