Don't Slip Away

Oh Do you know the sound of a heart
Do you know the way it falls apart
Do you know that I will always be apart
Apart of your life
Don't slip away


Can you see the scares on my heart
Do you know the pain that tore me apart
Can you see everything that I did
"Chorus"
Just open up your mind
And see me by your side
Just lay in my arms
And never be harmed
Just hold on to my hand
And I'll take you away
My love
Don't slip away


Can you feel the pain so deep inside
Can you feel it forever lie
Do you know that there's a reason why
To stay by my side
Don't slip away


Chorus"
Just open up your mind
And see me by your side
Just lay in my arms
And never be harmed
Just hold on to my hand
And I'll take you away
My love
Don't slip away
Don't slip away


My love I'm here to stay
Don't slip away
I love you for eternity
My love is everlasting
Don't slip away
Chorus"
Just open up your mind
And see me by your side
Just lay in my arms
And never be harmed
Just hold on to my hand
And I'll take you away
My love
Don't slip away
Don't slip away


Oh Do you know the sound of a heart
Do you know the way it falls apart
Do you know that I will always be
Apart of your heart
Don't slip away
Don't slip away
I love you
I'm here to stay

Wrote this on the night I wrote a bunch of songs including my last 2 posts. "Imagine" and "no more sorrow".

I love it when you keep it simple and straight ahead."Don't Slip Away" was a song that the Jefferson Airplane recorded.........back in the Stone Age.This is a good addition to the theme.

It'll be good as a rap,, is it?

It wasn't made to be a rap originally but I'm sure it could be easily.

Like most of your songs it has lots of energy and sense of urgency. "Basket Case" by Green Day, is that the direction the song could go?

I'm not sure I would have to listen to that song I will comment again once I do.

I didn't realize that that was the name of that song haha. I've always loved it they have a tendency of giving there songs multiple names. I'm not sure if this song would be like that or not it's hard for me to figure out but I'm sure if you heard it that way it probably would work.