A Love Hate Relationship

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  1. Ali Morrione said:

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    Once again me and you
    hate eachother. Happens
    everytime you end it. You’re
    going around saying I
    left you when really it
    was you. You just don’t
    want to look like an *******.
    You always had to make things
    so complicated. Now we can’t
    stand the sight of eachother.
    I never lied to you, I always
    stood by yourside, now I wouldn’t
    even spit in your direction.
    It’s like a cycle that we always
    repeat in, you’re heartless,
    and this time, i’m never talking
    to you again.

    A love, hate relationship.
    Were at eachothers throat,
    then we fall in love again.
    It’s a cycle in repeat.
    You try to act like the victim,
    but you’re not even close,
    i’m the one who was good,
    and you’re the devil.

    With bloodshot eyes, Devil hidden
    from within the inside. When
    you beathe, you breathe black.
    Were head to head again,
    it’s a never ending battle, it’s
    turning into a war. I’m tired of
    the fight, can’t take it no more.
    This love war we go through is
    annoying as ****. I fall for you,
    you fall for me and i’m the one
    who ends up hurting and it turns
    into pure hatred. Baby you’re lucky
    I don’t believe in revenge because
    if I wanted to ruin you, I could
    in a heart beat.

    Tore our pictures off the wall,
    burned your favorite sweat shirt,
    threw away you’re letters, all mean
    nothing to me, just a memory
    of a person I hate.

    A love, hate relationship.
    Were at eachothers throat,
    then we fall in love again.
    It’s a cycle in repeat.
    You try to act like the victim,
    but you’re not even close,
    i’m the one who was good,
    and you’re the devil.
     
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    StripedSweater said:

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    Solid song. What I'm assuming is a bridge, the stanza starting with "Tore our pictures off the wall" is pretty sweet. If anyone burned my favorite sweat shirt i'd be pissed! lol The hook is great except for one line; "It's a cycle in repeat". That just kind of seems redundant to me, but that's just one person's opinion. Overall good job! Keep writing!
     
  3. Peter Both said:

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    Well, it's a love hate relationship with hate prevailing and love on its way out. I can't imagine falling in love again with someone after having burned her favorite sweat shirt. But anyway it's a powerful song that Pink might like to sing.
     
  4. Ali Morrione said:

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    I really didn't burn it. It's just in one of my drawers, I used that as dramatic effect, and I got that sweat shirt before we broke up. We share the same friends, his sis is my closest friend, I am considered family so they all try to push us back together. It's a complicated situation. I did burn our letters and pictures. My point was that we some how just fall in love, break up and he hates me then I end up hating him, but that this was the final break up. I ment to change the wording on the last part but I forgot. He really is the devil.
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    When I first came across this song,I kind of skimmed through it.The reason is this;if there are no rhymes,I usually don't relate to the style of songwriting,and don't have much to say.Then I saw that Peter Both had replied.I took another look and love this!It reminds me of a couple of mine;Never Say Never and Diablo Diane.Well done!