I can't remember if I've posted the lyrics for this song or not, but I've now recorded it through my iPhone (and slightly edited it to remove any annoying noises i didn't want in there)! I used windows movie maker for the 'video', for some reason it cut off the last few seconds of music, and of another of my new songs (also on my Youtube channel) called 'Goodbye'. Please have a look at these 2 new songs if you have time, and my 2 old ones I've moved across from my old Youtube account. This new one is gonna be used for band demos and recordings and stuff so subscribe to the channel if you like and you'll see when there's new stuff up, but i'll be posting links on here (and some new lyrics that I wrote too). I've got a couple more songs to record when i get time, these will hopefully be up in the next few weeks. Anyway, enjoy. And let me know what you think

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DSbTz...ature=youtu.be

You are really good!

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it

hi kmatt,the song sounds xclnt.hv u ne plans to collar this song with ne artist.just let me kno.
i m a singer producer and m interested in ur tune and song.we can work out a 50 50 partnership.ur lyrics nd my music and voice production,
i will promote the song.
reegdeb@gmail.com

something about this reminds me of gaslight anthem, which is awesome, they're definitely one of my favorites. and this song kicks ***.

I like the song a lot. There is a lot of passion in your singing and your playing. When I listened to the song for a second time, there was one odd thing I noticed. In the intro of the song you have a shuffle feel in your guitar playing. From the moment you start singing the shuffle feel is replaced by a straight time feel. It didn't bother me much but I wondered if it was deliberate.

My only suggestion would be that,if possible,post the lyrics with the song.That way I can concentrate on just the song rather than trying to hear what being sung.Other than that;good job!

Hey everyone! Sorry I've been a bit quite lately, been concentrating on a few demos with the band, hopefully have something uploaded just before christmas or just after. The issue with the timing was 'kind of' deliberate, in the sense that It sounded like it had worked well so I didnt bother (or couldnt be bothered) to record it again! Here's the lyrics to this song:

What if this world was just one land
Your life was all in your own hands
What if your eyes were opened up
To something more than whats in front
So you could see this beautiful world

What if we all thought the same
Would there be torture, Would there be pain
What if cultures could hold hands
Finding a way to understand
So they could see this beautiful world

This beautiful world
Keeps going round and round
And now we're flying
Never to be pushed down
In this beautiful world
That keeps going round and round and round

What if this world was all the same
No rich, no poor, no one to blame
What if we had minds of kids
Would we take this life as it is
Accepting people as they come
Never afraid of the unknown
So we could see this beautiful world

This beautiful world
Keeps going round and round
And now we're flying
Never to be pushed down
In this beautiful world
That keeps going round and round and round
Round and round, round and round, round and round

This beautiful world
Keeps going round and round
And now we're flying high
Never to be pushed down

This beautiful world
Keeps going round and round
And now we're flying
Never to be pushed down
In this beautiful world
That keeps going round and round and round

This beautiful world
That keeps going round and round and round