
amaryn poetry and pics 2013
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curiosity_kills_the_cat said:
12-15-2013 06:06 AM
This gotta make you ponder the unknown....

Originally Posted by
amaryn
I have thought once in a while
it would be better to be dead
I would feel better being dead
I have thought once in a while
only silence would mean peace
it would leave my mind at ease
I saw the picture of a man
waiting somewhere for his bride
I saw the picture of a king
who didnot go out in the night
just surrounded by his luxury
he felt only safe inside
I have thought once in a while
death will soon knock at my door
what am I still living for?
I have never thought that I
would then enter paradise
too much suffering hurts my eyes
I saw the picture of those souls
still in people's memory
I saw the picture of their life
stormy as the wind can be
and as fragile as the laugh
of a little child can be
copyright: amaryn 2013
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curiosity_kills_the_cat said:
12-15-2013 06:15 AM
"Just a grin, my only friend."
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curiosity_kills_the_cat said:
12-15-2013 06:21 AM
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curiosity_kills_the_cat said:
12-15-2013 06:26 AM
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amaryn said:
01-07-2014 11:37 AM
a new approach
as winterwinds blow hard
I search a way to start
a new approach to live
and better ways to give
why do I seem astray?
I want to find that way
with patience by my side
I dwell here day and night
amaryn 2014
Last edited by amaryn; 01-07-2014 at 11:49 AM.
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amaryn said:
01-07-2014 11:48 AM
emptiness
pale foxy ladies wear winterfur
arrogance walking the streets
does it to them ever occur
whereto their emptiness leads?
nothing is sure in the world of today
walls slowly crumbling down
will show the truth:they have nothing to say
as they stroll through the streets of this town
amaryn jan 2014
Last edited by amaryn; 10-16-2015 at 02:34 PM.
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Doug Denslowe said:
01-07-2014 05:02 PM
Emptiness.......first off:Welcome Back and Happy New Year!
When I read the first line my blood started boiling!(I just read an article about a woman wearing a floor length mink whatever- it's- called)
Great little poem!I'll be back.........
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amaryn said:
01-09-2014 04:51 AM

Originally Posted by
Doug Denslowe
Emptiness.......first off:Welcome Back and Happy New Year!
When I read the first line my blood started boiling!(I just read an article about a woman wearing a floor length mink whatever- it's- called)
Great little poem!I'll be back.........
Thanks, Doug! I can really rely on you. I am also happy to see my good old friend Amethystos here and even Curiosity, our mutual friend.
Yes, it took a while, as my life has gone through substantial changes but now it seems to get more quiet again.
See you soon.
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jessie zuppo said:
01-12-2014 05:28 PM
Amaryn,
This is quite beautiful. I just love the fluidity of one line to the next. Your use of imagery is masterful. To be able to make a trait 'arrogance' take on a persona is just amazing. The "foxy" with the "winterfur"- genius!!
Your rhyming is very subtle. And in that way it is very delightful to read.
You have a new fan!!
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jessie zuppo said:
01-12-2014 05:31 PM

Originally Posted by
curiosity_kills_the_cat
To walk under these blossoms....
This poem is stunning!!! Oh my goodness- the word choices, the detailed descriptions...you allow your reader to embark on this journey WITH you- which is just remarkable. In that sense, it is a very welcoming and warm poem.
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Doug Denslowe said:
01-12-2014 06:57 PM

Originally Posted by
jessie zuppo
Amaryn,
This is quite beautiful. I just love the fluidity of one line to the next. Your use of imagery is masterful. To be able to make a trait 'arrogance' take on a persona is just amazing. The "foxy" with the "winterfur"- genius!!
Your rhyming is very subtle. And in that way it is very delightful to read.
You have a new fan!!
why am I "reply with quote" on Jessie's Reply........because I wanted to make sure she knows how happy I am that she too is now "a fan"!!Jessie:I always come to the Poetry section to see if Amaryn has written anything new.It's one of my "stops" while traveling around this site!So,I just wanted to let you know........great choice,sister!
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amaryn said:
01-22-2014 12:46 PM
vulgarities
come, dance with me the Assad dance
puppet on a string
a delicate balance
daddy has taught
to dance without thought
giving living in peace not a chance
come dance with me the rebels dance
time to revenge
no time for romance
dreams about paradise
throwing a fateful dice
refusing to give peace a chance
c: amaryn 2014
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amaryn said:
02-02-2014 05:29 AM
subtle
A few miles away
in the desert of love
no words are spoken
just a smile is enough
a subtle sign of what to expect
and a gentle warning
what one shouldnot neglect
@amaryn feb 2 2014
Last edited by amaryn; 02-02-2014 at 05:48 AM.
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Doug Denslowe said:
02-04-2014 10:07 AM

Originally Posted by
amaryn
A few miles away
in the desert of love
no words are spoken
just a smile is enough
a subtle sign of what to expect
and a gentle warning
what one shouldnot neglect
@amaryn feb 2 2014
Too subtle........
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amaryn said:
02-05-2014 04:02 AM
oblivion
under hundreds of plastic dirtbags
nothing lives
but the smell of decay
a challenge
of triviality
@amaryn 2014
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amaryn said:
02-05-2014 04:07 AM
the wind
with caressing fingers
strokes the wind through her hair
"console me"
she whispers
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amaryn said:
02-05-2014 04:10 AM
snow
snow
is innocence
the world doesnot know
@amaryn 2014
Last edited by amaryn; 02-05-2014 at 04:20 AM.
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amaryn said:
02-06-2014 01:59 PM
thank you
thank you, my friends, for reading and often also commenting on my poems during 2013 and jan.2014.
I have now opened up a new thread, where my poems for the year 2014 will appear.
Welcome as always!
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Doug Denslowe said:
03-29-2014 12:15 PM

Originally Posted by
amaryn
she mumbled words
she didnot even understand
a turned off engine
rusting into oblivion
Why was this posted here and not on "Amaryn poetry and pics 2014"??????