The empty moon
The empty moon was floating
without a world
and the people dancing
within
a
body
bending
night
sk
y
And we were two, just you and I
Thus the void corresponding
with your presence, something you said..
"as if communicating, transmitting thoughts
I know you by mere gestures"
And there it was
That empty expression
foraging between
its space...
There's something eerie and overwhelming
when I walk alone with you
yor tapestry looming
ever so still
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The empty moon
Last edited by Eccer; 01-27-2014 at 01:33 PM.
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I'm certainly not the one to speak about poems ...
but this is a beyond doubt excellent presentation of a poem!"Gilgamesh, where are you hurrying to?
You will never find that life for which you are looking.
When the gods created man they allotted to him death,
but life they retained in their own keeping" -
Very nice! Your choice of words and placement really paint a clear picture. Keep it up Eccer!
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Thanks all, I guess it turned out better than expected! If there's anything you guys want me to comment on, please leave a link