Sister (2/9/14)

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  1. Kerri Faye Yates's Avatar

    Kerri Faye Yates said:

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    And though you may not know me,
    I’m wrapped around your finger.
    From the day that I first saw you,
    I knew you were a winner.

    For you’d I’d stop the sun,
    From blinding you with light.
    I’d drain the ocean of every drop,
    Before I could stand to see you cry.
    And though you may not get to hear,
    I keep you in thoughts and prayers,
    Because having a little sister as beautiful as you,
    Is worth all of the painful tears.

    To watch you grow,
    I’d give so much up.
    It tears me apart,
    That I’ll never be known.

    I still remember the morning you recognized me,
    It brought tears to my eyes.
    But now when I see you,
    I’m nothing but a stranger and you hide.

    The stars will shine so bright for you,
    I’ll make sure of that.
    Even if I’m hiding in the shadows.
    Hiding in the shadows.

    For you’d I’d stop the sun,
    From blinding you with light.
    I’d drain the ocean of every drop,
    Before I could stand to see you cry.
    And though you may not get to hear,
    I keep you in thoughts and prayers,
    Because having a little sister as beautiful as you,
    Is worth all of the painful tears.
    ~Kerri Faye
     
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    Very sad and haunting... Is this a very personal song?
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    I'm glad you're back.......this is a good addition to your collection of songs.....not your best,not your worst.It's solid,but I feel it's more a country or slow song.....correct?
    The out pouring of replies is overwhelming................NOT!!!
    Last edited by Doug Denslowe; 04-21-2014 at 02:45 AM.
     
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    Quote Originally Posted by BackInBlack View Post
    Very sad and haunting... Is this a very personal song?
    Yes, yes it is
    ~Kerri Faye
     
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    Quote Originally Posted by Doug Denslowe View Post
    I'm glad you're back.......this is a good addition to your collection of songs.....not your best,not your worst.It's solid,but I feel it's more a country or slow song.....correct?
    The out pouring of replies is overwhelming................NOT!!!
    That's what I was feeling too, glad we're on the same page! Hopefully I can write something chart-worthy here soon, gotta get my head in the game.
    ~Kerri Faye
     
  6. MissMay3 said:

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    I like it. Sounds country-ish to me?!? Very sad story wich you tell with good writing. It touched me and made me wanna hear the whole story!!!
     
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    Quote Originally Posted by Kerri Faye Yates View Post
    That's what I was feeling too, glad we're on the same page! Hopefully I can write something chart-worthy here soon, gotta get my head in the game.
    Kerry.....when you first came to this site you posted some of the most extraordinary songs I've ever seen.It's difficult to keep that high of song lyric in every song.But,keep trying........but don't get down if you don't,for awhile,post on that level.I know you put your "best foot forward" when you first came here.Just do your best........some will hit,some will miss.That call songwriting!
     
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    Quote Originally Posted by MissMay3 View Post
    I like it. Sounds country-ish to me?!? Very sad story wich you tell with good writing. It touched me and made me wanna hear the whole story!!!
    Thank you <3
    ~Kerri Faye
     
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    Kerri Faye Yates said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Doug Denslowe View Post
    Kerry.....when you first came to this site you posted some of the most extraordinary songs I've ever seen.It's difficult to keep that high of song lyric in every song.But,keep trying........but don't get down if you don't,for awhile,post on that level.I know you put your "best foot forward" when you first came here.Just do your best........some will hit,some will miss.That call songwriting!
    It's hard to live up to that expectation!
    ~Kerri Faye
     
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    sad and beautiful
    My First English Rock Song + Clip:

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BUmkbv-v-vI

     
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    Quote Originally Posted by AmirMaor View Post
    sad and beautiful
    Thank you!
    ~Kerri Faye
     
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    Jim Colyer said:

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    A very unusual song! Nice!
     
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    Jim Colyer said:

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    Made a post here by mistake. Sorry.
     
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    Kerri Faye Yates said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jim Colyer View Post
    A very unusual song! Nice!
    Thanks Jim! I was trying to get outside of my comfort zone.
    ~Kerri Faye