2nd try: My Goodbye

My Goodbye

I look into you ice cold eyes
The only thing i see
You don't give a **** at all
You don't give a **** 'bout me
I loved you more than anything
Even more than you hate me
So please for one time talk to me
Please stop ignoring me

Emotions never get to you
Why couldn't you see
I've been dieing everyday
I'm dieing deep inside
You never made me put a stop to it
All you did was a lie
So what's the point of me
To continue this live

I knew it all along
So why didn't I see
You didn't give a **** at all
You didn't care 'bout me
And after all that I've said
You still don't understand
You are everything I need
You are everything for me

Emotions never get to you
Why couldn't you see
While I've been dieing everyday
I'm dieing deep inside
You never made me put a stop to it
All you did was a lie
So what's the point of me
To continue this live

I'd rather end this all
Just to see you cry
So please listen one last time
This is My Goodbye

It's rather different from the other one, and a bit shorter too, wonder what you guys think,

i really like this. a lot of feeling involved. good job!

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