at least one honest comment....

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  1. allisonnnicole said:

    Post at least one honest comment....

    I really want an opinion on this song that I wrote.


    KILL THE DRAMA

    Kill the drama boy, You seem so desperate
    Don't treat life like a toy, don't rush into such a mess

    Go out and find someone, who won't play with your heart
    Get the job done, as if its something to complete your life

    Don't cha
    Don't cha wanna kill this drama, boy
    (Oh oh oh oh oh)
    You don't need a girl to live it
    You don't need a girl to love
    Just kill this drama

    I lead you on to begin with, boy, I was faking it
    You were so stiff, speachless without words to comlete it

    You were so open to me, and I regret every last word
    Forget about me, boy, just go out and be everything you wanted to be

    Don't cha
    Don't cha wanna kill this drama, boy
    (Oh oh oh oh oh)
    You don't need a girl to live it
    You don't need a girl to love
    Just kill this drama

    Now you're obsessed, needing me to be yours
    Sorry, I've progressed, and I'm moving on

    So kill this drama
    (Oh oh oh oh oh)
    You don't need a girl to live it
    You don't need a girl to love
    Just kill this drama
    (Oh oh oh oh oh)
    You don't need a girl to live it
    You don't need a girl to love
     
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    andra said:

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    i kind'a like it.... from my point of view, i think you must have been really upset when you wrote it...