Criticize my lyrics.

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  1. markham1816 said:

    Default Criticize my lyrics.

    Untitled:
    Reality loses grip on me
    I can no longer breath
    My inner demons begin to surface
    I can no longer control the actions that perceive me
    There will be no one left

    Extinction of the human race will be my legacy
    On this momentous day
    You will cry out my ****ing name
    I will not be forgotten
    (end)

    Exodus:
    Enjoy this sunset, for it will be your last
    Embracing silence as you regurgitate the past
    Try to relive your childhood bliss
    These final hours are yours

    Prepare for your exodus
    I've come to take you away

    Swallow your pride and get on your knees
    There's no need to plead now
    The stage is set, the show must go on
    Just another memory
    Fallen victim to the ashes of time
    (end)

    Fate:
    Your fate is sealed
    Fate is real

    Look into my eyes
    I can see right through you
    All of your lies
    They were never worth my time
    Destroying all we were
    This will be the death of you

    Paint your canvas red
    Never to see the world again
    This is your destiny
    (end)

    ATM Disaster:
    The memories of what we had
    Will no longer haunt my dreams

    As you gaze upon me with your teary, blood shot, eyes
    Spreading your legs as I inject my disease
    Your screams of pain only increase my animosity
    The bastard child has been conceived

    This world is ****ed

    Lock me up and throw away the key
    This ****ing worlds not meant for me
    Lock me up and throw away the key
    This ****ing worlds not meant for me
    (end)

    We Will Not Stand For This:
    Unjust, you cannot trust
    The one who speaks before you
    Empty promises spill from his mouth
    You must see the monotony of his ways

    Open your ****ing eyes

    (We will not stand for this)
    Tear down these walls
    The barriers that stand between us
    Protesting those who hold us back
    (We will not stand for this)

    I will not go unheard
    Corruption bleeds into society
    We are no longer free
     
  2. HellBellsLiveWire said:

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    Pretty dark lyrics. Out of all of them I like the last set you had. What genre is it?