// Jade
tear, rip, ...i love it.
that's what that [b]itch said with pleasure in her eyes.
she laughs and smiles in pleasure.
spreading her wings, straddling on that thing, [f]ucking dirty two-timing being.

she doesn't know how i feel.
i know she doesn't owe me anything, nor do i for her.
everything has already been trampled on.
all she feels is pleasure and misery.
it's already too late to be free.

stop it, don't do it, why!
tearing myself apart just to let my words be heard.
blinded by lust her body ruptures with delight.
sound doesn't reach her.
color white in her eyes, she twitches with joy.
how much more until i become annoyed?!

she doesn't know how i feel.
i know she doesn't owe me anything, nor do i for her.
everything has already been trampled on.
all she feels is pleasure and misery.
it's already too late to be free.

time in the past,
went by so fast.
should have tried to change it.
should have tried to face it.

she doesn't know how i feel.
i know she doesn't owe me anything, nor do i for her.
everything has already been trampled on.
all she feels is pleasure and misery.
it's already too late to be free.

i can't go back no more.


I write in Russian better. In English, my vocabulary is limited. This is also like my first attempt at writing lyric. It's tough.

I have no idea what you're writing about but then again, I have no idea what Serj Tankien is writing about and System Of A Down have a million fans.

splendid. i am speechless.

i love it nice way to get the curse word in i might have to use it great lyrics

Ok....
That doesn't make any sense , but rap doesn't either :'(
4/5! (For Effort and Great Confusion)

Originally Posted by PrinceComedy

Ok....
That doesn't make any sense , but rap doesn't either :'(
4/5! (For Effort and Great Confusion)

Not rap. I'm trying to go for metal/punk/screamo feel -- w/e works for now. :\

oh sorry, i didn't recognize!