As Yet Untitled

I needed somewhere to see what people thought of my writing. I've always looked to the guidance of friends when showing off my work but it's better to hear the thoughts and opinions of people who aren't biased towards me and mostly tell me what they think that I want to hear.

Here it is anyway, I haven't got a title for it yet. I wrote it with a tune already in my head so hopefully it's not to hard to decipher.

You made a simple choice
It's not hard to do whats right
When you want to fight
You need to have a voice

Screaming in the dark
A hero will not do
When all eyes are on you
Don't forget who you are

Your time is running out
Will you paint a perfect picture?
With words of objection
A single line you shout
A line of conviction
You paint a perfect picture
You paint a perfect picture

You make your own choices
With the words you have spoken
The many doors you open
Will let the people have their voices

You pointed your gun
At a broken liar
Fulfill your desire
When all is said and done

Your time is running out
Will you paint a perfect picture?
With words of objection
A single line you shout
A line of conviction
You paint a perfect picture
You paint a perfect picture

You painted over me
A world I can't see
A vision of something that will make them think
Take up your pens
A tale that won't end
Until they realise that we are, we are the link

Your time is running out
Will you paint a perfect picture?
With words of objection
A single line you shout
A line of conviction
You paint a perfect picture
You paint a perfect picture

This is really good! Keep it up Oh, and btw I think the title should be Choices