i vnt finished this sng and i need advice!

"u said it was easy"



verse:
i thought u said
it was easy.

i thought u said
that love wouldnt tear u apart.


i thought u said ud be their every second
and that u wuldnt tear up my heart.

cho:
u said
u said
u said
it was easy>>>2


verse:
u made me cry wen u said goodbye,
but now i know this whole
situation is a bigfat lie

bridge:u called me baby, u called me hun.
but now i know u only did this for fun.


cho>>>>2




i hoped u liked my song.be perfectly honest.and i want yall to know tht the 1 prt in the beginng wen it said tear 2 times in a row, is tht it sounds soo much beter with the music.if it didnt it wouldnt be in there.so enjoy readin this and be honest!!!!!!!!and give me some more lines cause i have not finished it yet!!!!im just stuck!!!!

it probably sounds better with the music :S
hmm mayb you could make it more...wordy? LOL i duno :S

and to continue it..mayb u could write about the times u had...
or what u gave up?
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thts a good idea.thnx very much!!!!!!!!