No one, wants to win
Take it, on the chin
Don't know what is wrong
Feel I don't belong
Grass, is greener
Over the hill
Take, a good look
See if it's real
You're the one
That makes me feel
Feels so good
It can't be real
Oh, no...
Angels, flying high
Knowing, who will die
Don't know what is wrong
Feel I don't belong
Grass, is greener
Over the hill
Take, a good look
See if it's real
You're the one
That makes me feel
Feels so good
It can't be real
Oh, no...
People, everywhere
Got to, be aware
Don't know what is wrong
Feel I don't belong
Grass, is greener
Over the hill
Take, a good look
See if it's real
You're the one
That makes me feel
Feels so good
It can't be real...
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Over The Hill - Plz give some feedback :D
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Come on !
Come on, 23 views and no replys ?
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Come on
Plz. give some more advise about what I can do better ???
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I think it is wellwritten, a little too bright and happy for me in some case, but that doesn't mean its not good
I can't really tell you how to improve yourself, you would want to talk with someone who writes stuff like this themselfbut if you ever wanna venture into the heavy metal appartment, just tell me
anyways, a nice piece of work again, very different from your other lyric, which is good ofcourse, the more subjects you get around on, the better chance of improving you skillsso keep up the good work
When the fullmoon rises and i fall to all four, back off or i might bite
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Nice song ! I like it but there are some little things to improve if you want it to be perfect
Anyway , it's a very nice song and I like the way you related the title with the lyrics
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Well , I`d change those parts :
Angels, flying high
Knowing, who will die
Don't know what is wrong
Feel LIKE i don't belong
Grass SEEMS greener
Over the hill
Take, a good look
See if it's real
You ARE the one
That makes me feel
Feels so good
It can't be real...
I used big letter for things I would changeIt doesn't mean you have to change them , it's just my opinion on how the song would sound better
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