My Song : Life ( Suggestions and opinions please xD )

Hey .. I`m new on this forum . Last night I`ve written a song and I wanna share it with you guys . I want some opinions too please

LIFE



Hey hey hey hey hey !

We cry , We smile
But we do them for a while
We ask ourselves what this life is worth
But there's no time for questioning , cause life is short

Now
How is life when you don't wanna live
It is but a sad story in which you don't believe
Hey
How is life when you don't wanna die
Having everything you want , have no reason to cry
But
What if it happens , a light after some while
Making your tearful face showing a happy smile ?
Or
What if it happens that the bad things start
Leaving you with nothing left but with an empty heart ?

We cry , We smile
But we do them for a while
We ask ourselves what this life is worth
But there's no time for questioning , cause life is short

Life
Can be a sunshine but the sunset will come
You just have to wait and go where the sun rises from
Life
I guess all it is just a very long road
Sometimes it's rocky but sometimes it's made of gold
And
Some people take shortcuts and some people fall
Some people sometimes are slowed by some random wall

We cry , We smile
But we do them for a while
We ask ourselves what this life is worth
But there's no time for questioning , cause life is short

After all we all get to its end
It's ain't about how much time we get to spend
But it is
Neither about how much gold we find
In fact
It's about the foot steps that we leave behind

We cry , We smile
But we do them for a while
We ask ourselves what this life is worth
But there's no time for questioning , cause life is short

By the way : I heard a hip hop beat yesterday and tried to sing this on it . It all went perfect except the Chorus which was too slow for the beat . When I wrote this I was thinking it would fit on a combination between a little hip hop combined with Soul and Pop . What do you guys think ?

if u can tell me the song that u were singing it to i can try it out,,nice lyrics by the way

Originally Posted by JayR

if u can tell me the song that u were singing it to i can try it out,,nice lyrics by the way

Am I allowed to post youtube links ? Cause it's a remix on youtube. And ty

I hope I am allowed to post youtube links cause I haven't seen any rule saying that on the FAQ .. Well , anyway , the hip hop beat I thought it would fit on is : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LDJQ5Uu6c0Y

nice.



please review mine, im beggin u


http://www.allthelyrics.com/forum/ly...my-lyrics.html

http://www.allthelyrics.com/forum/ly...my-lyrics.html

I like the verses most, bot the chorus is good too
Keep it up!