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My last rap of the day


"lies"

as i hear you lies
it feels like u peed in my eyes
in burns like fire
cuz now i know your a liar
as you tell me that we won the lottery
and that we are moving to a better city
and we moved to beverly hills
as u showed me hundred dollar bills
i was small back than it was monopoly money
i looked it was very cunning
so we moved of course and she took me to a box
it was filled with vomit and rocks
whats wrong with you mom we not living in a house?
im sorry son i just said we moving to a better town not a house
as i grow up i hated liars
it feels like they shoved me with pliers
never trust them
but we have them

Very blunt and honest--I like it, especially the monopoly money part--and peed in my eyes made me lol!

I've an odd relationship with Rap music: I think its the most beautiful to read, but, I just can't find it pleasant to listen to. That said, I love your lyircs.

yay 2 fans haha thank you guys