Fairytale World! Feedback?=p

[Verse 1]

Take my hand and walk with me
I love adventures and mysteries
I love your smile, adore your eyes
This is love, there's nothing to hide

[Chorus]
Don't bring your crazy friends
It's just me and you
Walking on wind
It is fake, but it's true
Where celebrating love
That's just what WE do
Lets have a good time
We'll rock some moves

[Hook]

It's a fairy fairy fairy 'fairy tale world'
It's filled with lots of love
It's a place where where people marry
Just remember that place......fairy tale world

[Verse 2]

My dad will never know
Not even my mom
Cmon we're just kids
Having some fun
We'll run on water
And fly on trees
Spl spl spl splash in the leaves

[Chorus]
Don't bring your crazy friends
It's just me and you
Walking on wind
It is fake, but it's true
Where celebrating love
That's just what WE do
Lets have a good time
We'll rock some moves

[Hook]

It's a fairy fairy fairy 'fairy tale world'
It's filled with lots of love
It's a place where where people marry
Just remember that place......fairy tale world

[Ending Verse]

I need your love
To feel me up
Its like a drug
Can't resist you [resist you]
You make me feel,like Juliette
And you are my romeo
So, start the show and take me
and take me
and take me [take me]

[Chorus]
Don't bring your crazy friends
It's just me and you
Walking on wind
It is fake, but it's true
Where celebrating love
That's just what WE do
Lets have a good time
We'll rock some moves

[Hook]

It's a fairy fairy fairy 'fairy tale world'
It's filled with lots of love
It's a place where where people marry
Just remember that place......fairy tale world

Walking on wind
It is fake but it's true

That line makes since, yuh just gotta think about it.

And can somebody pleaseeee comment.I really love this song and worked hard on it.