Take Two

Triple meaning of the title:

Take two, a play ... wanting to reenact the scene ... maybe get it right the second time ... a vain and futile wish.

Take two hearts, obviously, love can't thrive or be complete in just one heart.

Take two down in the flames. Failure is never felt, or brought on, by just one.

Past and future tense, because what both of us had before, we will never forget. Present tense, because even in denial, we're still there.
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Take two lonely hearts
and put them together
One and one become
one soul forever
Build a world that
only we could see
You were my world
and it will always be.

Sign your name
Oh I felt you so true
The world was ours
just me and you
Like crystal we sparkled
we stole the moon
Like crystal we broke when
our song went off-tune

The song, we wrote it
We sang it we spoke it
Let dreaming invoke it
but shadows revoke it.
Shadows seemed lies
a flirt in disguise
Then endless retries
couldn't stop our demise

Take two, retro mood
as love is subdued
still screaming for life
while we felt the knife.
As I watch you go
I still want to know
where we went wrong
how we killed our song.

I am not me
It will always be 'we'
Take two to the sky
Kill two in the fire.
As I watch you go
I still want to know
where we went wrong
how we killed our song.

The song, we wrote it
We sang it, we spoke it
Let dreaming invoke it
but shadows revoke it.
Now I watch you go
but I still want to know
where we went wrong
how we killed our song.

Take two, you and me
Just want you to see...
didn't ask for change
just to rearrange
so I could see a closed door
on what was no more
Takes two to make one
Takes two to come undone.

I am not me
It will always be 'we'
Take two to the sky
Kill two in the fire.
As I watch you go
I still want to know
where we went wrong
how we killed our song.

The song, we wrote it
We sang it, we spoke it
Let dreaming invoke it
but shadows revoke it.
Now I watch you go
but I still want to know
where we went wrong
how we killed our sweet song.

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Didn't feel like defining verse and chorus yet, but shouldn't be too hard to do. Just asking for comments, impressions, feedback of any kind, if anyone cares to.

I care to comment. You commented on one of my posts. And TBH this is really good.

Thank you soooo much!!!

Your Welcome, i just noticed how new i am here. I hate being new, but this forum is pretty fun.

Ima go eat some breakfast. And if any of you didn't know, i looovee Taylor Swift. She is my inspiration. Matter of Fact, look up Invisible- Taylor Swift. I song that song every day. Bye<333

But you're not "new" anymore. As I've noticed in random browsing, you've added more to this site in just a few days than some people have cared to contribute in 2 years.


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Great song! ... Taylor Swift - Invisible ... the lyrics .... what a message ....

Omg, you actually looked up. Thanks. I like to listen to her songs because in moments they relate to what i'm going through. These are just some favorites that i like of her.

Picture To Burn
Love Story
White Horse
Invisible
Our Song
Teardrops On My Guitar
Thug Story [Actually rapping with T Pain]
Fifteen
Fearless
You Belong With Me
Tim McGraw
Your Not Sorry
Photograph



That's a lot, i know.lol I am actually listening to Love Story right now.I LOVE that song.

The song, we wrote it
We sang it, we spoke it
Let dreaming invoke it
but shadows revoke it.
Now I watch you go
but I still want to know
where we went wrong
how we killed our sweet song.

This is my favorite part, but the whole song is great, along with the message .

P.S: @ LovinAllMusic, I love Taylor Swift too

Lol, i looove Taylor Swift.I didn't think i would be a fan of country music, but it is AWESOME.lol It's like my favorite thing now. I don't know if you heard of him, but I also like Justin Bieber. I'm not obsessed or anything but he's pretty cool. I love his song "Baby" featuring Ludacris.

I like Justin Bieber, but I can't listen to the song "Favorite Girl" without crying. It was me and my ex's song...

My boyfriend broke up with me a long time ago, it didn't matter though..i knew he was cheating on me, i just tried not to believe it. Lol, i listen to favorite girl right before i go to bed. It's like justin is singing to me.lol