A hello from France.
This is my first Rap Lyrics, I don't know if the rhymes are good, and if the words are strong, but i hope ya will appreciate, and give some constructive criticism about it.

This a little Remix of the brand new shady's song, Going Through Changes.

[Verse]
Now I'm facing my own demon,
Good versus Evil, this will finish on this round,
Face to face, we will fight on this ground,
Whatever the cost, i will be granted,
Until the victory, imma never fail down,
I will always give back up, I'll never surrender,
Like Bravery, loyalty, honesty, in the head of a soldier,
Baby just follow me, there will be no more pressure,
I will ever been your doctor,
I will never let you suffer,
Yeah, life is nothing more than a game,
Problems are small pain to imagine,
You just have to appreciate what you gain,
You have to trust in yourself you're not damned,
However it's hard, just face the pain,
You are stronger when you use your brain,
Don't take it for a blame,
Listen to me, I'm just trying to explain,
Because we ain't always living the same,
To be or not to be, that is a shame.


Hope you like it, please give some feedback. My english is not perfect, but i try hard, to make something really good !

I'm not really into rap (not at all actually) , but I love the message . Keep it up