my rap

No actually I dont, you killed it :/ I think you havent read the name of this thread properly because your comments are random and unasked for. Ever heard of constructive critisicm? And I'll have you know slang is not for 'G's, its just a modern form of english. I dare say my english grammar exceeds yours

hahaha fuk me VivaPaletina go haha i like

Originally Posted by LILAusty

i eat hot peppers daily just to get pleasures
if your flows are better
how come they make you sound like a begger
you say my flows wack
you need to go pack and walk to the train track
and be ashamed of your flow cz the only thing you mouths good for
is to give my **** a blow
and babes its not you who grabs me parts its ya mam
which **** me cant stop her farts
you after arts
but your a tart trying to out rap me but i just rip you apart
so go back to your wrighting pad
and go ask for better rhymes off ya dad
and dont foget to tell you mam a'll get her last name for a dollar tomora

Oh No, U didn't just talk about my mama ?
I hope your sad xss is ready fo' some drama
See, I'm more peaceful then the Dalai Lama
But U give me lust for murder like I was Osama
I fxck your whole family eventho' I'm a girl
Your mum, your auntie and everyone in ur world
I'm a lyrical Artist
But u gave this a twist
Now you better don't miss this
I diss you in your biggest bliss
I use my mouth to Spit

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Originally Posted by lencoo12

Oh No, U didn't just talk about my mama ?
I hope your sad xss is ready fo' some drama
See, I'm more peaceful then the Dalai Lama
But U give me lust for murder like I was Osama
I fxck your whole family eventho' I'm a girl
Your mum, your auntie and everyone in ur world
I'm a lyrical Artist
But u gave this a twist
Now you better don't miss this
I diss you in your biggest bliss
I use my mouth to Spit

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Hey, if you're gonna quote my rap, then atleast put the whole thing on it, lol.

this is to the guy who thinks turks are idiots,

check it i dnt have a mic but ill still wreck it,
if this was a strip battle ill leave this faggot here but naked,
he'll enjoy it and ill bet he'll bend over,
he'll get ****ed in his *** so hard it'll be blue like sesame streets grover
anyway i aint got time for this ****,
this is a freestyle for the turkish hatin prick

you talking bwt me haha

Originally Posted by LILAusty

you talking bwt me haha

No, he's talkin' about H3RIZE, hahaa

or well thats cool then haha

In that case I dedicate my avatar to H3RIZE

Originally Posted by LILAusty

zachre i know i aint the best hahha but i write fine lol cz my lyrics a beter than yours hahaha

just because I shorten word's down doesn't mean I can't write <<<< look at that

hahahahaha

There's no apostrophe in the word 'Words'

This is incredible, these lyrics are terrible.
A million laughs a minute and I never even read 'em all.
Lil Rusty raps retardedly, so much sh*t it's hard to see.
You're not a G, admit defeat, please do not rap after me.

Your bars make no sense, like they been flipped 90 degrees.
That makes them poles, and like the one in your pants, unlikely to please.
Half your lyrics were good, but half of them were stolen.
More *ss than a toilet seat? My Gran rapped that to Moses!

I terminate germs, with lyrical sperm
Impregnate your brain, I'm insane, twisted and turned.
Spray for infinite minutes then return to remind me.
The only reason I can't see you, is 'cos you're way behind me.

As for the lady rapper, "How you doing? When do you get off?"
"Every time I see you baby, my knickers feel like a wet cloth"
This thread is too high strung, let's kick it back at my place.
Let these faggots decide who gets to write about me on their Myspace.

16 Gold bars.

Removed

Even though I think you've insulted practically everything and everyone Jeffs -> nice

Originally Posted by 020Jeffs

This is incredible, these lyrics are terrible.
A million laughs a minute and I never even read 'em all.
Lil Rusty raps retardedly, so much sh*t it's hard to see.
You're not a G, admit defeat, please do not rap after me.

Your bars make no sense, like they been flipped 90 degrees.
That makes them poles, and like the one in your pants, unlikely to please.
Half your lyrics were good, but half of them were stolen.
More *ss than a toilet seat? My Gran rapped that to Moses!

I terminate germs, with lyrical sperm
Impregnate your brain, I'm insane, twisted and turned.
Spray for infinite minutes then return to remind me.
The only reason I can't see you, is 'cos you're way behind me.

As for the lady rapper, "How you doing? When do you get off?"
"Every time I see you baby, my knickers feel like a wet cloth"
This thread is too high strung, let's kick it back at my place.
Let these faggots decide who gets to write about me on their Myspace.

16 Gold bars.

I'm doin' quite fine, thanks for axin',
Lookin' stylish & I'm Just done waxin
Now I'm familiar with Multi-taskin'
So let's relax 'nd,' We can have a chat 'nd
Talk about this & that 'nd

After that, we can kick it to ur place
No liquid pants allowed in this case
No shxt, We only got to first base
Though I know I'm killin' it with this face

And hey, it's okay, U can impregnate my brain
But only if I remain sane 'cuz I'm the main game
Now can U maintain my crazy ways ?
I'll explain, Let's say I drive the fast lane
On judgement day, I'll be the Last dame

And atlast if these fags
gon' be writin' nonessential shxt on their Myspace,
Recognize I'm badder then bad
& I'm atleast as presidential as Mister Hayes !

You may be killing it with that face, but I was looking at your chest.
I was looking at your *ss, I was looking at your breasts.
F*ck first base, lets just f*ck anyway.
Wait, I recognise you, I think I f*cked you yesterday?!

We could have great sex, you can suck my d*ck too.
Don't worry little miss, I'm just f*cking with you.
You're asking me if I can maintain your crazy.
Sit down, and let me tell you something lady.

I was never even born, I just escaped from the womb.
I killed my mum and dad wearing a superman costume.
They took me away from the booth to a youth hostel.
I escaped in a way that made maids say "that's impossible"

I turned myself inside out just to be here.
I been living off my own damn blood for three years.
So you think your sh*t's f*cked up? Look into my face.
The only thing bad about you, is the rhymes you make.

I don't mean to offend you, I just contend like that.
I hope you get famous so that you won't write back.
You've been chopped and fried, I still hate the way your rhymes taste.
Make like a sneeze, and get the f*ck out of my face.

I see u try your best, but how could U be peepin' at my chest
Or my xss, or my breasts when my only pic is not lower then my neck ?
Oh hold on a sec, U right, last night we met & had sex
U were that bxtch that came in a minute, but what the heck,

Next time you wanna fxck with me, first double check
No suckin' *****, bxtch I'm reckless, I annex your texts
U escaped from the womb ? How ? Through ur mom's xss ?
I assume u just a kid who reached an impasse

Spittin' shxt like you live off ur own blood for 3 years
Pathetic, ain't it ? But have no fear, Molotova is here
Esthetically pleasin' with the illest lyrical gear
Genetically skilled and All up in your atmosphere

So don't worry kid, I ain't nearly offended
Really, 'cuz My name stands for splendid
Usually I don't even react to such babies
You've been beaten & eaten raw by a lady

Expand your intellect, your pic don't go no lower than your neck.
But I have superhero vision, rated X.
How rude, you got mixed up between two dudes.
The guy that came in a minute was the guy at the front of the queue.

I clutched my ticket tightly, I was only number twenty two.
Your p*ssy leaking spunk you screamed "don't worry, I got more room."
The only gear you got is the crack I paid you with,
I also paid you with some smack that'll shake your lips.

You said it right, have no fear when you arrive.
But when I come up on the beat, you better scream and hope to die.
F*cked you physically, lyrically and mentally.
I f*cked your brain so hard you forgot how to spell AESTHETICALLY.

Talking about beating and eating raw babies?
Like the ones you abort with a coat hanger on the daily.
You seem to fail with punctuation, let me tell you what is what.
You're a weak sentence and I'm ending you. I'm a f*ucking FULL STOP.

Now Jeffie, don't lie, I got good eyes,
I'm pretty sure U was that guy tryin' to hide
Your small dxck from a chick called Queensize
& All I did last night was makin' it rise

You claim you were number twenty two
That must mean that there are plenty of fools
Just like you, screwin' around 'til they diseased
Now don't you accuse me of bein' a ho, oh please

You really think shxt like this can get to me ?
Actually I couldn't care less, so I just let you be
And I never said shxt about eatin' raw babies
What's up with you switchin' lyrics lately ?

You're mentioning my spelling too
So therefore I'm tellin' you
Even though English ain't my native language
Don't be hatin', this could be in your advantage

My advantage is the fact that I'm stone cold better than you.
I'm ready to spew, you been shredded and chewed.
It's nights like these that I lay awake and contemplate
My ability to lyrically slap the make up off your face like Layer cake.

I write then spit, killing this, bite off your clitoris,
Leave you floating in a jar with AIDs and syphilis
I'll whisper in your ear then leave your drink spiked like a porcupine.
Teach you to look down your nose, like you about to snort a line.

Staple my middle finger to your forehead, permanently
My turbulence turns birds I meet, to psycho therapy
I'm the Shepard, you're the sheep so get to following.
I'm surprised you can spit when you're so busy swallowing.

You called me a baby, told you me you beat and eat me raw stupid.
My lyrics are incredible, you don't have to make me prove it.
Don't bother with a come back, it just looks out of place.
If I wanted my come back, I'd scrape it off your face.

Jeff Jeff Jeff ... U killed me multiple times up in here, so I'mma stop makin' a fool out of myself by replying. I was the only 1 to accept the challenge though, lol.