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  1. VivaPalestina's Avatar

    VivaPalestina said:

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    Moltova I actually love your lyrics Never mind Jeff
  2. Molotova's Avatar

    Molotova said:

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    Hahaa thanks VivaPalestina, I'm still in love with my lyrics too, but that Jeff boy got mad skills, lol. I gotta practise some more if I wanna defeat this one ... :-)
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    VivaPalestina said:

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    He's good too (even if he swears too much ) but you also have some strong vocab which is pretty rare these days ma cherie
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    Molotova said:

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    Hmmm, I tried to let it go, but I couldn't ... It's gonna take a lot more to make me shut up, lol.

    Your advantage is the fact that my English is whack
    I'm ready to attack any bxtch stabbin' me in the back
    At days like these I keep it straight & my flow's got you laced
    My ability to lyrically create a debate U can't follow anyway

    I write then spit, while chokin' on the thick skin of your dxck
    U've been bitten & ripped by a bxtch, this is pure vicousness
    It's me that whispers in your ear that I'mma eat you for dinner
    Better listen to me Jeffy, as if I was principle Skinner

    If your middle finger is the size of your little timber, U can staple all U want
    I linger in your air like I'm the winner when I'm in it, U can hate, I'll flaunt
    With my capacity to keep it real unlike your small herd of sheep
    I have the audacity to continue to put your flows to a rem sleep

    Only thing I'm swallowin' is my own word vomit, so go ahead and spit
    About the bxtch that would never quit bustin' your balls & shxt
    No matter how many times you out rap me, I'll be back on track
    Smack the cracks out of your raps, just go back to your shack
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  5. 020Jeffs said:

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    I don't have to make a rhyme to tell you that was sh*t.
  6. LILAusty said:

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    020jeff you don't impress me
    you see im the best to be
    not like you a silly wannabe
    you say my rhymes a stolen
    i chose em
    you jealous cz mine a golden

    don't waste time with silly boys
    who still play with action man toys
    na that to far lets be fair
    it not his fault he's got no pubic hair
    look my lyrics are mint so focus
    look at your lyrics there bogus

    you try to look hard with your week *** lyrics you spit
    your try to diss me but that all you come up with
    ill make you say my name 24/7
    you cant beat me am a heavy assault weapon
    i blow you away like a heat sealing missile
    my flows light up Christmas tree tinsel
    listen to me i have the solution
    fuk of lil Austy is the revolution

    you are all on fire
    and im the matchstick
    this dude 020jeff is a prick
    with a **** that cant give pleasure
    so the girls to me and get the treasure

    and 020jeff the names lil Austy not lil rusty
    what's the matter cant you read is ya brain dusty
    my rhymes make you want to take your life
    this thick **** will miss his chest with a butter knife
    now listen up im still hear
    for you to fear
    if you don't believe me all *** rap ya mam rear
    took it to far
    but to be honest im the star
    that sparkles in your girlfriends eye ball
    fuk with me ill make you fall
  7. 020Jeffs said:

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    Okay little b*tch, if it's on then it's on.
    I just dealt with the princess, and another came along.
    I don't have all day to listen to your nursery rhymes.
    I'll let you have three verses, then let the forum decide.

    You're right, I have no pubes, I shaved them off, clean.
    Bagged 'em up and sold them to you, you thought it was weed.
    Miss my chest? Please, I killed myself plenty of times.
    I dropped a lyrical bomb, and couldn't find a place to hide.

    I'm like a house that's useless. I'm flawless and ruthless.
    I flow like a river mouth, but leave you speechless and toothless.
    If your lyrics are mint, then you should swallow your words.
    Smells like one of those heat 'sealing' missiles went and cooked up a turd.

    I regret writing this verse out, if I wanted to prove that what drop is sick.
    I should have just reposted your lyrics, I win by contrasting opposites.
    You write in stanza's of five and eleven? You're higher than Mars.
    If we're gonna do these 3 rounds, a verse consists of 16 bars.
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    Molotova said:

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    Okay, U got me, my last rhyme was shxt, but it's on again
    The Princess is killin' it, I'm the beginning & the end
    I'm really feelin' it, give me a pen, My talent extends
    And yes, on a certain level you're better but it depends

    All I need is a mic and some time to try & combine
    New styles, new lines, just rhymes that will blow ur mind
    I got all kinds of fine material which you can't define
    Imperial skills and I'm not the type to leave a man behind

    Why did you have to attack Lil' Austy just like that ?
    Acting bossy while in fact your act is abstract
    Workin' on my nerve tract, Plus u've got a lack of tact
    No impact at all, I'm still whole & my rhymes remain intact

    You can shove them 16 bars up in your xss
    I drop a freestyle 1st class with fifty bars to surpass
    Anytime I feel like it, 'cuz no 1 can write on command
    & If u reply again, don't bxtch but PROVE you're the better man
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  9. 020Jeffs said:

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    HAHA, hey Molotova I'll battle you after I wanna see what Lil Austy does with his 16 bars.
    I'm gonna see who the people think is the winner between me and him then I'll battle you.
    cool?
  10. Molotova's Avatar

    Molotova said:

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    It's all good baby baby !
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  11. MwisHere said:

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    lol jeff got some insane multis and metophors
  12. MwisHere said:

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    but hey jeff lol you said lemme give you three verse and let the forum decide at the top then at the end said a verse consist of 16 bars, idk just some feedback lol killer stuff though, * or if you post 2 more for him that be 3 haha man idk im blazed...
    Last edited by MwisHere; 10-01-2010 at 10:55 AM. Reason: i like editing for no reason
  13. 020Jeffs said:

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    Yeah I give a verse (16 bars)
    then he gives a verse.
    Then I give a verse etc..
  14. LILAusty said:

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    ok il battle you mate but tonight cz am off out to get pissed is that cool
  15. 020Jeffs said:

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    yeah I gotta go out, I got a litre of whisky to get through
    Happy f*cking mate.
  16. Molotova's Avatar

    Molotova said:

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    Nobody online ? I'm bored.
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  17. LILAusty said:

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    oryt listen its definitely on if you want 16 bars
    that's ok but my lyrics and rhymes may cause you scars
    im the type that will leave your face in the dirt
    because am to good plus i see you in a skirt

    listen to this rhyme i spit hot flows
    keep giving me lip and al bloody your nose
    look at you ya not a good rapper just a kidder
    come to the north east my sister needs a baby sitter

    you creaming in your pants as i make no mistake
    listen i get chants as im the rapping heavyweight
    don't **** with me im insane did things in the past
    so don't be surprised if you get a shot gun up your ***

    LILAusty is my name making it simple and plain
    but got no choice to come down like acid rain
    my lyrics are dope so go back skipping rope
    you say the wrong thing al wash ya mouth out with soap


    soz it took a while mate went on holiday av never done 16 bars b4 lol
  18. Tyler6270 said:

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    I'm online. But I suck = (. Jeff isn't allowed to post after this either lol.
  19. Saybers Lyricals said:

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    What is this Shxt
    A homophobic affair
    Then again
    Thats a shame
    You both have nothing to bare
    I admit you both are bad-*** rappers
    But when i drop my bombs you'll realise your both slappers
    Cus you havnt seen the mortar im firing
    Insulting you is just tiring
    And whats with the wannabes getting involved
    I spit my ryhmes, you all run and problems solved
    Thats why they call me Sayber
    Im your Overlord
    Take 1 shot at me
    And you die by the sword
    Jeff why fight 16 bars?
    I could spit 200 but your cutting me down
    i wont wake up for less than 32
    You accept the challenge
    u better get ready
    Before i carpet bomb your brain
    With these lyrics drivin you insane
    Messing with me
    Its like travellin a one-way line
    could i make it any clearer
    theres no turning back
    i got a higher kill rate than the soldiers in Iraq
    Heres the 28th bar
    29th
    30th
    31 and coming to 32
    Twice as much already
    Im not even halfway through
    I guess ill save the rest for later
    Wait for you to get out that corner
    Got a reply ready? ive got one for you and thats FAIL
    Sorry but its time for me to take you out of this fairy tale
    Last edited by Saybers Lyricals; 10-16-2010 at 04:35 PM.
  20. Tyler6270 said:

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    Hey, first time at a battle but hey, Only way to get good is to try. Saybers:


    Not the greatest there is but I'm pretty d**n good
    Who you jokin kid we all know, you just a wannabe hood
    I'm here to sit you down, take you to shcool just wait and see
    you can't begin to dance with me, Ima wicked a** MC

    I'm droppin like I'm atomic, earthquakes everywhere, busting platonic
    You can't keep up with me, the disease is spread
    Getting in your blood stream, your already dead
    My games like the wind in the trees, beautiful and phonic

    Sneaking up assassin ready to strike
    Killin trash rappers every day and night
    Same verses same lines almost all alike
    Clean my cum outta your eyes so you can see this sight

    I'm speedin now like a car on the f**kin freeway
    Going over 100 no ones gonna stop me, nohow noway
    I'm the best there is, my verses are grammatical, quite fanatical
    Wannabes like you getting raped by me is f**king periodical