Invincible - give it a read please, criticise it! :p

Thread: Invincible - give it a read please, criticise it! :p

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  1. 101commentary said:

    Lightbulb Invincible - give it a read please, criticise it! :p

    Verse 1
    Life's next endeavour
    Circles you
    Forever

    The years to come
    Consider me
    A rising star
    Trapped in your arms

    Tonight
    Sign on
    The dotted line
    Take what's mine

    A sharpened gaze
    Take's a day's refrain
    From you
    In a headless chicken coop

    Chorus:

    Don't fret
    Darling I
    Am invincible

    Don't fret
    Darling I
    Am invincible

    Verse 2

    It seems useless
    A type of haze
    I can't escape

    A piece of mind
    Mistaken signs


    That's as far as I have gotten. It sounds stereotypical, but this is a song about a relationship I had that I was worshipping while I was in it, but looking back on it, it seems like the girl I was with was somewhat made to look like a goddess in my eyes, but really she was bringing out the worst in me.

    The line about invincibility is actually sarcastic in that sense - it's saying that I think she didn't consider my feelings, but instead continued to do things that upset me, and in that sense saw me as null of feelings or didn't care. Sorry for the essay, it's hard to explain without writing loads down!
     

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