Can I get some crit on these lyrics please? I've never actually written a song like this before, this was more experimenting with different genres and I kinda like this one. Thanks!

If the sun was to never rise tomorrow
would you see what's left to follow
hold my hand and understand
this is what destiny had planned

Or would you try to find the light
even if it meant running all night
leave the safety of the nest
fly away cause you wanted the best

of it all
and then you'd fall
cause the gravity of a life without me was
unbearable

but then it's me
and only me
you're turning me into what I cannot be
an empty shell
it's unbearable

So take it back
to a time of wonder
where we never heard the sound of thunder
time stood still
we'd surrender
play pretend over what was slowly about to break

you make mistakes, the sun was sinking
and when I'd blink, I'd be retreating
the lighting strikes, and I'd be praying
that the lighting never lands in the same place twice

You took me for granted, thought I'd be there
but for this moment, I've prepared
I know what I must do
get on my knees and show you

I can't trust you
you're delusional
you can't replace what once filled this empty space
beating softly
with no history of pain
till you came

But it's my drug
and like a little lighting bug
I'd come swarming back
and show you everything's not black
the sun may set
but it'll rise again tomorrow
it's far too late to say farewell
cause you know
it's unbearable